Haiku - The Holiday 2006 Version
Sucked into candle scents,
which aromas do I crave?
Pine, berries, and warm sand.
Tree from Nova Scotia;
a gift from the Great White North.
Do we have enough lights?
Online shopping is grand.
In pajamas at midnight,
I think this is the best.
Lamb shanks, perfectly cooked,
For our dinner Christmas Eve.
Hey - we had carrots too.
It's not really a gift
but the love behind the gift
that so captures my heart.
posted by Miliana at 8:34 PM
1 Comments:
Stoic-
Check your rules for haiku - your syllables are way way off. It's supposed to be a 5 syllable beginning, 7 syllable middle, and 5 syllable ending.
I received a warm sand scented candle as a gift and all I can say is it smells warm & sandy. I can't make this shit up.
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